Line 1 · thesis
In my view, bilingual schools should not put English before Chinese.
在我看来,双语学校不应该把英语放在中文前面。
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In my view, [subject] should not put A before B.
Sentence study
Bilingual schools should not put English before Chinese and should work toward balanced progress in both languages.
Line 1 · thesis
在我看来,双语学校不应该把英语放在中文前面。
In my view, [subject] should not put A before B.
Line 2 · thesis-extension
相反,它们应该推动两种语言的平衡发展。
Instead, [subject] should work toward balanced progress in both A and B.
Line 3 · topic-sentence
首先,把英语放在中文前面会削弱学生与自身文化的联系。
To begin with, putting A before B can weaken [group]'s connection to [value].
Line 4 · topic-sentence
此外,真正的双语能力——两种语言都很强——会带来重要的大脑益处。
Furthermore, true [ability] offers major [benefit] benefits.
Line 5 · topic-sentence
另一个关键点是,学业成功不应只由英语能力来衡量。
Another key point is that [goal] should not be measured by [single factor] alone.
Line 6 · concession
诚然,一些家长和老师担心,如果不优先重视英语,学生会在竞争激烈的全球环境中落后。
Admittedly, some people worry that without prioritizing A, [group] will fall behind in [context].
Line 7 · refutation
然而,事实要更复杂。
However, the truth is more complex.
Line 8 · conclusion
归根结底,双语教育的目标不是用一种语言取代另一种语言,而是赋予学生真正流利地穿梭于两个世界的强大能力。
In the end, the goal of [system] is not to replace A with B, but to give [group] the powerful gift of [benefit].