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Snacks at School

Students should not bring snacks to school because snacks distract, create mess, encourage unhealthy choices, and can be unsafe.

Line 1 · thesis

However, I believe that students should not bring snacks to school.

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然而，我认为学生不应该把零食带到学校。

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However,I believe that students should not bring snacks to school.

Pattern

However, I believe that [group] should not bring/use/have [thing] in/at [place].

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Line 2 · thesis-extension

In my opinion, snacks cause distractions, create messes, lead to unhealthy choices, and can even be dangerous for some students.

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在我看来，零食会造成分心、制造脏乱、导致不健康选择，甚至对一些学生有危险。

Chunks

In my opinion,snacks cause distractions,create messes,lead to unhealthy choices,and can even be dangerous for some students.

Pattern

In my opinion, [thing] cause(s) [problem 1], [problem 2], [problem 3], and can even be dangerous for [group].

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Line 3 · topic-sentence

To begin with, snacks are a big distraction in class.

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首先，零食在课堂上是很大的干扰。

Chunks

To begin with,snacks are a big distraction in class.

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To begin with, [thing] is/are a big distraction in [context].

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Line 4 · topic-sentence

Another reason is that snacks create messes and extra work.

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另一个原因是，零食会制造脏乱和额外工作。

Chunks

Another reason is that snacks create messes and extra work.

Pattern

Another reason is that [thing] create(s) [problem 1] and [problem 2].

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Line 5 · topic-sentence

Equally important is the issue of food allergies.

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同样重要的是食物过敏的问题。

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Equally important is the issue of food allergies.

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Equally important is the issue of [risk].

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Line 6 · concession

Admittedly, some students get hungry during the day, and hunger can make it hard to learn.

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诚然，有些学生白天会饿，而饥饿会让学习变得困难。

Chunks

Admittedly,some students get hungry during the day,and hunger can make it hard to learn.

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Admittedly, some [group] experience [problem], and [problem] can make it hard to [goal].

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Line 7 · solution

However, there is a simple solution: a longer lunch period or a designated snack time with healthy options provided by the school.

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然而，有一个简单的解决办法：更长的午餐时间，或者由学校提供健康选择的指定加餐时间。

Chunks

However,there is a simple solution:a longer lunch period or a designated snack time with healthy options provided by the school.

Pattern

However, there is a simple solution: [solution].

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Line 8 · conclusion

After all, school is a place to grow our minds—not our snack collections.

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毕竟，学校是让我们增长思想的地方，而不是扩大零食收藏的地方。

Chunks

After all,school is a place to grow our mindsnot our snack collections.

Pattern

After all, [place] is a place to [true purpose]—not [wrong focus].

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